Thesis Statement
Rising Professional Athletes and Professional Athletes are paid way too much money for their age for just tossing ball around and should prove that they are worth the money they are paid. To prove the value of such athletes they should be required to go through a series of physical tests, testing their athleticism, to sure that the scouts from each team see how well they can still or will be able to perform.
Very cool topic that I agree with heavily! Good solution and maybe they could be tested academically so that maybe it can prove that they are ready to earn that level of money.
ReplyDeleteI like this, as apart of my paper is that professional athletes make too much. I think you need to add a set tests and scores for the test that they will have to go through, as each person giving the test may score differently
ReplyDeleteInteresting topic, but I think they already get tested on their performance and athleticism. Maybe you need a different angle.
ReplyDeleteI like your view on it all. I also think you should add an academic test to show that they have basic knowledge. correction: in the second sentence change ball to balls
ReplyDeleteYeah they are already tested on their performance and athleticism. Its hard enough to make it on the high school team as it is
ReplyDeleteGood topic. This is something everyone can really relate to because it affects our society.
ReplyDeletei totally agree that all atheltes are paid way to much for the sports that they play. It's ridiculous how much money atheltes make in a year. I think your solution is a start to the problem, but may not be a total problem solver.
ReplyDeleteI agree that athletes are paid WAY too much. Now a days, professional athletes are only in the game for the money. A set of tests may be a start to this problem however I don't think it is the best solution.
ReplyDeleteI agree with your topic because some atheletes make more than the president.
ReplyDeleteI think it is a good topic, but maybe presenting a few more solutions would make your case stronger.
ReplyDeleteGreat topic, your angle on your solution may be a hard one to write such a lengthy research paper on. But not to say you can't if you don't want to. Your thesis issue was clear, good job.
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